Needs paint

[crzyfotopeeple]

 

[KenC]

A little too much in the frame, I think. If you want to show the whole structure, this would not be the angle, given the large shrubberies against that wall. If you want to show an interesting part, the front wall and porch are good, and I like the tree. Starting with this image, I'd crop about a third of it on the right. I might also crop a bit on the bottom, just to make the porch bigger in the frame, although if you want to project it or make a large print this wouldn't matter.

 

[crzyfotopeeple]

Thanks for the critique.

 

[Deleted member 215987]

I think that abandoned buildings like this one have more impact in B&W.

 

[HughGuessWho100 15]

I love the textures of "old". I would spend hours photographing that old house.