New batch from today! I love your feedback!

mattijcowan · Apr 28, 2011

Davor · Apr 28, 2011

your image tag should look like this

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there is not front slash in the first tag

mattijcowan · Apr 28, 2011

Fixed

mattijcowan · Apr 28, 2011

I think I should tilt the first cardinal one a bit so he's either going up or straight.

mattijcowan · Apr 28, 2011

No comments?

reedshots · Apr 28, 2011

like the images, although #2 is a bit to dark with no real subject and #4 not sure what its a shot of (no defined subject) just has me looking around the shot for something to look at.

mattijcowan · Apr 28, 2011

Thanks. I intentionally made the second one quite dark. But yes it has no real subject. I guess the subject is the atmosphere/feel. I think it's meh too. The one with the white pipes, that was my intention. If your eyes keep moving and not resting (notice the arrows), that was my vision with it but I feel it was a bad vision. I at least should have had a flow to the movement, it's not there. It's not my favourite.

mishele · Apr 28, 2011

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j28 · Apr 28, 2011

#2 I really like. It breaks a lot of "rules" but it drew me in.
The one with the pipes I would crop down some and take out the overhead light. I might even do it in black and white.
The last two don't do a lot for me. I like the concept of the hallway, but the blurred man just throws me. I get that it was intentional, and it seems like you were going for a sense of urgency, it just distracts me. The tree between the birds looks OOF. It's a neat snapshot, but that's about it.
Two and three are my favorites.

MinisculeCatastrophe · Apr 29, 2011

The first one looks nice, but it's a little uninteresting... I also like the second one but it's too dark for my tastes. The third is really really really nice but a little dark in my opinion, but others may disagree. it would be nice if it "popped" more. The fourth is very interesting as well. The fifth is JUST my cup of tea--i love it! The sixth looks nice, but it's a little crooked... it looks like you cropped it in post processing; if you have aperture, there's an easy way to straighten it out.