New here. Critique my picture?

[samitakespictures]

Constructive criticism appreciated.

Please note that this is my first time editing a picture with Photoshop (CS4) as well.

 

[rdefined]

I would lighten a d smooth out their complexions/faces a but but I like the picture. Great start.

 

[Guinness Man]

Seems Framed a little odd.
Its a picnic right? Should be more lively, I dont get the expressions.
Seems like a flash may have made a huge difference. What was your set up? Looks like straight point and shoot

 

[MK3Brent]

Cramped in my opinion.
Perhaps a little more contrast.

 

[Dillard]

a looser crop would be much better. You've cut part of her head and a foot. A little to tight for my liking

 

[Derrel]

a looser crop would be much better. You've cut part of her head and a foot. A little to tight for my liking

DIZ-actly!!!

 

[DiskoJoe]

Yeah the crop is way too tight and I am also unsure about what you are trying to convey with this shot.

 

[GeorgieGirl]

Aside from the crop comments this image really put a smile on my face. Too cute.