Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Peeb, Oct 11, 2015.
Yeah, it's framed dead-center, but I had to edit out something, so it just kinda is what it is...
Meanwhile, the old horse wonders what's to become of HIM!
the second one is a bit funny
the first one does nothing for me
The first one just made me laugh because it seem like such a juxtaposition of 19th century technology to 21st-century. 100 years ago, someone in that position was rolling a cigarette, instead of Snapchatting! Made me grin.
On the second one- waiting for someone to ask the horse: "Why the long face?"
Ba-dum Boom! Thanks you, you're too kind- I'll be here all week. Don't forget to tip your waiter- try the veal!
Placing the subject to the extreme left in #1 would have helped quite a bit I think.
And pulling back wider.
Centering your subject makes for a dull composition generally.
Yes, getting his cell phone in the shot would have helped it.
Had time to play with it over lunch hour- photoshopped out the offending item on the right so I could back up a bit more:
No doubt! As the Dad of the horseman, it just kinda made me laugh.
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