New Photographyer on TPF

[whit~foto]

I'd appreciate any feed back on these photos. Thanks!
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[STICKMAN]

Thats cool you got some friends willing to help work with you........Cool Shots...........

 

[whit~foto]

Yes! A big family makes it accessible for models! They are obligated to
Except for the chair... that isn't my family... prop only! But I'm sure you knew that...ha ha

 

[rufus5150]

#1 - Your subjects are out of focus and the tonal range of the image makes the B&W conversion rather bland. This needs a lot more contrast. The highlights on the door are distracting.

#2 - Not a good use of selective color. The face is hidden in the shadows and could have benefited from fill (reflector, etc).

#3 - This looks like a family snapshot, reinforced by things like the blown hots pots on faces. Focus seems to be on the tree behind the people?

#4 - This is a picture of a chair. It lacks anything interesting. The composition is nearly completely centered, there's not a whole lot of contrast, the lighting is not remarkable. There's no real 'wow' factor in the image at all.

You've got a lot of room for improvement. Keep at it, esp with that many models at your disposal.

 

[whit~foto]

#1 - Your subjects are out of focus and the tonal range of the image makes the B&W conversion rather bland. This needs a lot more contrast. The highlights on the door are distracting.

#2 - Not a good use of selective color. The face is hidden in the shadows and could have benefited from fill (reflector, etc).

#3 - This looks like a family snapshot, reinforced by things like the blown hots pots on faces. Focus seems to be on the tree behind the people?

#4 - This is a picture of a chair. It lacks anything interesting. The composition is nearly completely centered, there's not a whole lot of contrast, the lighting is not remarkable. There's no real 'wow' factor in the image at all.

You've got a lot of room for improvement. Keep at it, esp with that many models at your disposal.

I appreciate your harsh feedback. I am a beginner and definately still learning.
Thanks.