New Self Taken Portraits

[EvonT.]

this time, i experiment with full body shot, and here is the outcome haha.. C&c are greatly welcomed^^

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[niforpix]

Not bad, not bad at all. I finally see what you really look like without all the post processing hehe

Nice work!

 

[The_Traveler]

Both of these are quite well conceived.
There are however a couple of things that hurt.

In both of these, these sides of your legs at the knees are the most distinctly colored and in focus, thus drawing the eye away from the top of the photo.

The lens flares or reflections hurt also.
You have a natural eye and are, of course, a terrific subject.

 

[EvonT.]

Both of these are quite well conceived.
There are however a couple of things that hurt.

In both of these, these sides of your legs at the knees are the most distinctly colored and in focus, thus drawing the eye away from the top of the photo.

The lens flares or reflections hurt also.
You have a natural eye and are, of course, a terrific subject.

thanks for the constructive comments, will try to eliminate these mistakes next time ^^

Not bad, not bad at all. I finally see what you really look like without all the post processing hehe
haha.. hope that i do not look too bad for ya lol.. thanks^^

Nice work!

 

[lifeafter2am]

Pretty good. That blowout is a little distracting though.