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[A.S.H.rimp]

Hey all!
I'm new to the Forums, and was wondering what everyone here thinks of this shot:

Let me know how I can improve!
Thanks...
-Andrew

 

[Hobbes]

hehe that's one nice shot. I have actually never seen a cat sleeping outside under the sun before.

 

[Traxtor]

It's a nice photo indeed. But if you want my opinion I think that the cat is taking up to much of the photo. I know it's the main subject but I feel like the camera should have been a little further away from the cat. Just my view of things. But the picture is nice

 

[Harmony]

IMO, DOF is spot on.

Composition is nice, although I really don't like that beam.

And the whites are blown out...

 

[A.S.H.rimp]

Thanks all for the replies!
You definitely helped me to see problems. Hmmm... Maybe I can get the cat to do that again, and I'll have another try.

 

[KOrmechea]

IMO, DOF is spot on.

You took the words right out of my mouth... "it must have been while you were kissin' me."

Not the second part so much (that's awkward), but it's from a good song and one I think of everytime I think of the phrase.