New to Photography and Editing! Looking for feedback.

[Yehonatan]

Just another day | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

First picture is obviously not edited, it's the Original. other two I edited(Really new to lightroom) Will appriciate any advices/criticism.

Thank you very much!

 

[Ysarex86 80]

The original you edited in LR -- did you use an NEF file or a JPEG file?

Joe

 

[Yehonatan]

I used the Raw file, Exported to jpg

 

[KmH]

For future reference:
Photography Beginners' Forum

Use one of the forums in the - Photo Galleries - Photos submitted by members for general display or critique - section of TPF if you want C&C improvement tips on some of the photos you have taken.

For editing C&C and discussion of graphics programs and their use, TPF has the Graphics Programs and Photo Gallery | Photography Forum

A place to show off your post processing skills, with explanations on how you achieved the results, including specialty images such as HDR.

What edits did you do, and what LR tools did you use to do them?

 

[Yehonatan]

Sorry about that, Will make sure to read better next time though I did look for a forum specified for editing.
Thanks.

 

[Tabe]

Of the two edits, I like the first one (middle of the three images on Flickr) more. The second edit feels washed out where the first one, although perhaps still a touch dark, feels more "right" to me. I also like the coloring on the sun better in the first edit. Both edits are a huge improvement over the original though - well done.

 

[dennybeall]

Number 2 makes a nice, more balanced, picture, I like it better than 3..