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[freshmeat]

I'm fairly new to this and I'm wanting to learn more. I'm here seeking constructive criticism nothing too HARSH cause I'm proud of what I've done..
I own a Sony DSC-HX1 and I'm still trying to figure things out on it, such as changing shutter speed, etc.

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I said i'm proud of what I've accomplished, nothing too harsh
Dayna

 

[feel3sam]

pretty nice captured

 

[Designer]

#1 Aww... now that's just DARLING!
#2 Pretty good
#3 Nice shot of the back of her head, but you missed her face!
#4 Way cute!
#5 OMG cute!
#6 Fantastic timing!

Keep it up.

 

[gsgary]

You came to the wrong place if you don't want harsh, for me the only one that has potential is 5 smile and blue eye the rest are just snap shots

 

[dxqcanada1]

Shooting down is not generally the best angle.
Be aware of background.

I also do like #5 ... it has the least amount of clutter ... nice expression.

 

[Haya.H]

pretty much what everyone else said. Number five is my favorite as well.
Your backgrounds tend to be very distracting.

 

[freshmeat]

Thanks for the advice and not being too harsh. Like I said, I'm new to this. :blushing:

 

[mommy-medic]

I'll be the odd man out, but to me the eye in 5 looks over-enhanced and unnatural.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Why the watermark? I would suggest waiting on using a watermark until you have work that you feel is at a professional level. You did say you are new correct?

 

[DiskoJoe]

I'll be the odd man out, but to me the eye in 5 looks over-enhanced and unnatural.

Thats the only one I liked at all. The rest just look like plain old snap shots of everyday family chaos.

 

[Kayak]

Fun pics and you are brave for sharing, but I would encourage you to take a little risk...ask for some critical feedback if you are seeking to move on beyond family snapshots. Five has potential with the subjects great expression, but you could pose it slightly and still maintain the playful moment being captured. Get the little strands of hair out of the right side of the face and try some different lighting perhaps.