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GrahamPhisher

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HorrrrYay good feedback! I been getting a lotttta negative lately.
 
Nice, very sexy pose...at least for an old boy like me...yes loose the shadow
 
Other than losing the bit of shadow lower right? Nice!

Yup, that is what I noticed as well.

I like the ring light effect, but the extra shadow doesn't belong.
 
Sexy as hell, that dress is a winner any day of the week. (You wouldnt happen to know where its from?)

My only question would be, does she have a lazy eye, or is that my eyes getting lazy?

(And no, I actually dont really care, I'm just trying to prove my eyes ventured above the neck). :)
 
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Sexy as hell, that dress is a winner any day of the week. (You wouldnt happen to know where its from?)

My only question would be, does she have a lazy eye, or is that my eyes getting lazy?

(And no, I actually dont really care, I'm just trying to prove my eyes ventured above the neck). :)

thanks n good eye! I adjusted the eyes.
 
thanks n good eye! I adjusted the eyes.

Good lord thats hot. I dunno if its just the mood I'm in, but thats the most provocative shot ive seen in a while. Its the kind of shot you see on a billboard ad and from then on take a big long look everytime you pass. (Its got a lot to do with the dress as well, not to mention thigh-highs).
 
thanks n good eye! I adjusted the eyes.

Good lord thats hot. I dunno if its just the mood I'm in, but thats the most provocative shot ive seen in a while. Its the kind of shot you see on a billboard ad and from then on take a big long look everytime you pass. (Its got a lot to do with the dress as well, not to mention thigh-highs).

Yea she looks a lot better with the eyes fixed, she doesn't have any lazy eye tho, I accidently made it lazy while retouching.

N thank you! "on a billboard" thts awesome. i never really liked the dress, but you made me like it :D
 
Nice. Good stuff in there.

Have you considered making that lower-right shadow (not the shadow of her boot, the shadow on the background) more of a, uh, how do I even say this. Make it bigger, but feathered out across more of the image. I feel like it's there to accentuate the Hot Light Bright upper left, and I feel like if it was more prominent, more of a gradient starting from the center, it might make the upper left pop more.

I like the shadow of the boot, I think it plays well with the ink on her arm.

The boots themselves I am not loving as much. They seem out of place. Too sleek and black, not enough pattern/floral/detail/texture.
 

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