Newbie C&C Please

[Allyson]

None of these were taken with my brand spankin' new Canon. I used an Olympus. I'm still very new to DSLR and any advice would be appreciated!


Untitled by allysonwilsonphotography, on Flickr


Untitled by allysonwilsonphotography, on Flickr


Untitled by allysonwilsonphotography, on Flickr





(This house was SO amazingly cool. Tree's growing inside, missing roof... awesome.)

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

#1 I would prefer a tighter crop....

#2 I wish her face was more visible...

#3 I would prefer a tighter crop...

 

[Allyson]

Untitled by allysonwilsonphotography, on Flickr

Here's one with the face more visible, for some reason I just don't love this shot...

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Untitled by allysonwilsonphotography, on Flickr

Here's one with the face more visible, for some reason I just don't love this shot...

I like this much more.

 

[dxqcanada1]

I like the way her face is out of focus in #2

I have a problem with the other two shots ... the surrounding scene and model do not seem to mesh.
It would have been better to have your model wear clothing that is "ragged" or "derelict" (hmm reminds me of Zoolander), like the house.

 

[lolondar]

i like the pictures.... but i have to ask..... what is she sitting on .... * has a problem with information and must know random things *

 

[Allyson]

I like the way her face is out of focus in #2

I have a problem with the other two shots ... the surrounding scene and model do not seem to mesh.
It would have been better to have your model wear clothing that is "ragged" or "derelict" (hmm reminds me of Zoolander), like the house.

We actually just found that place driving on the highway on our way to the beach where we originally intended to take the pictures. She's very much a tomboy, getting her to wear anything other than a hoodie was a battle in itself I'd love to get another model out there though!

i like the pictures.... but i have to ask..... what is she sitting on .... * has a problem with information and must know random things *

Weirdly enough, she is sitting on a door to a walk-in cooler. Apparently that building used to be a butcher's or something and it's just deteriorated over time...

 

[lolondar]

.... thats cool!!!! and tomboys are cool to they somehow end up being more photogenic then girly girls :O

 

[tevo]

#1 Tighter crop would be nice
#2 Less tight of a crop, more visible face
#3 (a different composition would be nice) Tighter crop...

Bus Rider pretty much nailed it.

 

[photo guy]

I like the photos, however, a tighter crop on the 1st and 3rd would help so it shows more of her and less of an old building with her just sitting in it.