Newest try....

[fsquare]

New attempt at my lighting setup and posing. Of course, C&C welcome.

This was my last attempt, hopefully I've made some progress.

http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/people-photography/237005-testing-out-my-setup.html

 

[Patrice]

Not a bad photo. Can you get her to pose this again but with less pressure on hr chin.

 

[fsquare]

Thanks

Same night, different pose

 

[Robin Usagani]

#2 the light is too hot. Both photos need a reflector camera right or fill light. But this CC comes from a guy who doesnt do studio photography LOL.