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MatchlessArts

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With darkness all around...light holds a sense of peace

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I feel like there's slightly too much black space at the top.

I don't like the way the person is posing. You can tell that someone said to them "go stand over there". I actually get more of a spooky "horror" kind of vibe from the picture so I think it would be really freaky if the model was looking directly at the camera. They'd have big dark shadows under their eyes and if you could get a tiny highlight of a light behind you or over to the side to reflect in each eye it'd REALLY give me nightmares, lol!

Overall though, I like the colours and what you've tried to do!
 
way too much negative space up top
time to crop it
 
I would crop a little (20%) on the left and top... too much dead space ( don't need that much to still emphasize the contrast between light / no light). Interesting shot though!
 

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