North Light Window

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[weepete]

Interesting, I like the concept and it looks well shot in terms of exposure, tonal values etc.

However I think there's something about the composition I can't quite put my finger on thats throwing me off a bit.

 

[Mike Lamb]

The walls are ominous so I think I'd like it better if there was something more thought provoking in the window.