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My sister, niece and niece's boyfriend went to a local "Safari Park" this weekend--one of those cheesy little places where you drive through and see African Kudus standing next to a regular old cow and a potbellied pig.
I called it "Safari Park of Horrors" because my niece (who was driving) and her boyfriend (who was in the front passenger seat, in charge of the food bucket) kept getting accosted by various animals that would thrust their heads into the open window and then stuck their big, slobbery, disgusting-looking tongues out in search of food--both my niece AND her boyfriend ended up screaming like a girl--more than once!

Anyway--I have quite a few pictures and will probably post a few of them later, but I wanted to start with this one, because it's different from my normal processing "style." (Though, as I mentioned in another thread--I don't think I have a style--but I do know I tend to not do much "heavy" processing. I think that's more because I'm lazy than because it's my "style.")

Immediately after being accosted by some of the larger animals, we entered this wooded area and this fellows came walking, very slowly and kinda ominously, toward us--like we'd now entered THEIR world and they were just deciding exactly what horrors awaited us. :D

Because of the "ominous" sense of the actual experience, and because we'd gone from a bright, sunny field to this dark woody scene quite rapidly, I just "saw" this as a darker sort of picture. So that's how I tried to process it. But since I don't really DO that (I think I've only used a vignette about three times in my life), I'm not sure if I achieved the dark, ominous scene I was after.

My *specific* questions are:
--Is it still too "bright", especially around the front animal's face?
--Did I go too heavy on the vignette? Not heavy enough?
--Is there something else I should do to create that dark, ominous feel?

Any other C&C that isn't related to my specific questions is welcome as well!

Oh, and yes, I know that I cut the rump off the one on the left. Cr*p. My excuse is, I was in a car, shooting with a 70-300 WHILE moving--I did what I could. :D

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The vignette feels good to me. You can go a bit darker, I think, mostly bringing the lighter tones down a bit more but also pushing the shadows down some (the midtones look about right to my eye). Color temperature can go much much cooler, and then desaturate a bit:

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Looks very Game of Thrones.
 
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The vignette feels good to me. You can go a bit darker, I think, mostly bringing the lighter tones down a bit more but also pushing the shadows down some (the midtones look about right to my eye). Color temperature can go much much cooler, and then desaturate a bit:

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Thanks--I do think that takes a little of that bright "edge" off that I was still struggling with. That gives me something to play with a bit.
 
Awesome shot!! I wouldn't worry that part of one of the animals is cut off, it's the furthest back and not the main subject. So they're kudus, I was thinking you guys had some strange looking deer in Tennessee.

In amolitor's edit I think the animals look a little blue. I prefer it to look as realistic as possible, and I think the original looks great. Well done!
 
Ooo! I like your darker side very much! I'm leaning toward your first edit.
 
I like it. :)
 
I find myself feeling like the deer thing intend me harm, (seriously)

So, whatever your choices and whatever your intent, that was my reaction...
 
I find myself feeling like the deer thing intend me harm, (seriously)

So, whatever your choices and whatever your intent, that was my reaction...

This! I really like this shot Sharon but damn those are some unfriendly looking deer and I've had a momma deer stomp and snort at me, it started with that "look" you seem to have captured here lol
 
Somehow, the follow up shot to the one you posted, Sharon, was the one where they pulled back the lips to reveal bared vampire teeth. I totally get where Chris and Judi are coming from. Those three have malevolence written all over them.
 
Looks very Game of Thrones.
Did you watch yet?
Sharon, that's a good thing.

I have to agree w/ the others. They be scary. It looks like it's a haunted woods or something.
 
Looks very Game of Thrones.

Is that a "good thing" or a "Bad thing?" :lmao:
I've never seen/read The Game of Thrones--hate to admit, I don't even know if it's a book, a movie or a TV show.


I watched it until some lady hatched a couple dragon eggs, I thought that was enough for me.

BTW, love the photo
 
Looks very Game of Thrones.

Is that a "good thing" or a "Bad thing?" :lmao:
I've never seen/read The Game of Thrones--hate to admit, I don't even know if it's a book, a movie or a TV show.


I watched it until some lady hatched a couple dragon eggs, I thought that was enough for me.

BTW, love the photo

Rick you didn't watch long enough. Then the dragons hatch some lady eggs... and the cycle continues.
 

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