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[Trever1t]

This morning's adventure

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_POR4207-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

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_POR4302-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[tirediron]

I really need to trade gigs with you for a while!!

 

[Trever1t]

come on down! Or up or over!

I'd love to hear thoughts, critique, tips, suggestions on whatever comes to mind. I am still quite the student and everyone has a valid opinion.

 

[mishele]

Damn, you live too far away!! I would love to shadow you on one of your shoots!! Oh and maybe drink a little!

 

[pixmedic]

come on down! Or up or over!

I'd love to hear thoughts, critique, tips, suggestions on whatever comes to mind. I am still quite the student and everyone has a valid opinion.

not me.

unless wowzas is considered a "valid opinion"

 

[LarryLomona]

Gorgeous!! A really beautiful shot with very nice lighting and colors

 

[Trever1t]

Damn, you live too far away!! I would love to shadow you on one of your shoots!! Oh and maybe drink a little!

Shadow, no way, you'd be looking down the barrel

 

[FITBMX]

I am totally out of things to say about photos, that are all just so great!

 

[Trever1t]

Think of something!

_POR4207-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[pixmedic]

perfect?

 

[Trever1t]

Oh come on, have i graduated to the top of my class...no I don't think so but yeah, she's beautiful isn't she? Her skin naturally perfect. body of a dancer.

 

[JoeW28]

Nice work, attractive model.

Here's my critique. I like #2 more than #1. #1 seems a bit too "vanilla" to me in terms of the pose and expression. Let me be specific:
#1: Given the background, I'd like a little more backlighting behind her to create some separation/dimension from her hair and the wall. Left arm...I want to do something different with it. At minimum, a bit of separation between the arm and the top. Don't have her look straight on to the camera--move the chin 1-2 inches left or right to make it a bit more dynamic. Right now, she's a lovely model, attractively shot but the pose and expression tends to de-emphasize her curves.
#2: I like this shot much more. The expression is just a bit warmer, the pose seems a bit more dynamic to me.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

 

[Trever1t]

Thank you again JoeW!

 

[Virgil]

Excellent work.. Some kinda lighting to separate her hair from the back ground might add to the photos.

 

[EOV]

Well if you are forcing me to pick apart a beautiful picture I can. Is that the way her necklace is supposed to look on the second shot? I find it slightly distracting. If it wasn't supposed to look like that, ie the chain part was supposed to be in back, it makes me think attention to detail was lacking.

That said only because you forced me! Otherwise very beautiful photo once again Trevor.