Old, Rubbish.. sweet

[Shamir]

Hey guys
Sorry ive been uploading lots of pics xD.. is just that im very exited of my camera and all those stuff!
but oh Well>! heres another one

hope you like it =) :blushing:

 

[jvgig]

The roof looks flat from the light panel on. The rest of building also lost a lot of dimension as well. Keep an eye on the highlights in the future to make sure you do not loose too much detail, especially when the light color variation is what is providing the interest.

 

[tirediron]

I do like it, however jvgig is correct. Highlights aren't your friend. I would suggest reshooting this earlier or later in the day to maximize the light, and also maybe try a high-contrast B&W.