I believe these were taken with a Sony Xperia E3?
if so, your working with a 5mp camera and strictly digital zoom.
what did you use to edit these photos?
the contrast and/or vibrance seems very high, to the point of being overdone.
also, fake blur looks fake. especially when you add it to areas that would not normally be rendered out of focus in the shot.
the first shot might have been the strongest of the set, but the processing on these really just kills all of them.
do you still have the unaltered shots so we can see them basically straight out of the camera?