On the beach.

jesse101 · Sep 24, 2012

here are some pics taken on the beach (location Avala beach CA):

Model53 (1 of 3) by photographyjjm, on Flickr

Model56 (1 of 3) by photographyjjm, on Flickr

tirediron · Sep 24, 2012

Interesting processing.

412 Burgh · Sep 24, 2012

I like #1 the natural feel to it. With shadows on her face and not super amazing lighting. It's simple and works for me

#2 I don't like. Just not a fan of the angle. Processing looks a little flat.

651stp · Sep 25, 2012

same as 412

manaheim · Sep 25, 2012

I think it's the suit that's bothering me. It's very complimentary to her breasts, but not complimentary to her mid and lower sections. Whatever that suit is doing you don't seem to have compensated for it much in her poses. Still... the processing on the first one is interesting.

EW1066 · Sep 25, 2012

Either she has a bit of a tummy or the suit makes her look that way in shot #2. The dots on the suit line up in such a way as to draw the eye directly to one spot on her tummy. That effect is not there in shot #1. The way she has her back arched in the first shot elongates the front of her torso and appears to get rid of the "tummy". In the second shot her back seems straighter and the bathing suit seems to "bridge" from the bottom of her breasts to her tummy, which seems to thicken her torso.

While the rest of her body appears relaxed, her right forearm and hand seem tense and strained. Like she doesn't want her hand where you put it. It seems very chiseled and sinewy and doesn't match the smooth curves of the rest of her body.

I'm no pro, and I certainly don't do this kind of photography. These are just my observations and they are worth exactly what you paid for them.

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