On the pier C+C please

[barfastic]

hey guys,

so i was walking around a pier today with a friend of mine with a cup of coffee at hand and i took some pictures i would like some C+C on.

1.

This image is an HDR composed of 9 shots... this is my first attempt at HDR, and i think it turned out quite nice. It turned out quite dramatic without being OTT (imo).

EXIF:
iso 100
f/3.6
18mm



2.

Exif
iso 100
1/50
f/5.6
200mm


3.

This is my favorite image from the day... i feel like i can relate to it. (i have been recently drafted into the military, and during basic training i wasn't allowed outside the base for about a month... the closest i got to the outside world was the fence, and i kept finding myself latching on to the mesh quite often.)

Exif
iso 100
1/500
f/4.8
55mm



on a side note, these were all taken with my new 18-200 VRII, and i gotta say im loving it more and more each day!

Any feedback positive or negative is more than welcome!

Regards,
Barf

 

[Ramones]

I really like them

number 1 is probably my favorite the only thing I don't like is the horizon on the right looks like it curves up

 

[Vicelord John]

i like the second shot quite a bit.

 

[Jacki]

Picture #2 seems blurry in the top right and bottom left corners.
I really like #3...it seems to "speak."

 

[barfastic]

number 1 is probably my favorite the only thing I don't like is the horizon on the right looks like it curves up

yeah, thats probably distortion from my lens... i didnt have my wide angle with me, so i had to make due. Im going to the same spot tomorrow for some more pics, hopefully it will be more promising.

Picture #2 seems blurry in the top right and bottom left corners.

yeah it looks like motion blur... although i dont think thats the case...