im assuming thats an airplane. and you used a long shutter speed. good idea i am going to try this considering i live right by o'hare (chicago) airport
I think the composition is pretty cool and I like all the trees. I would try the same shot w/out any planes if possible and see how it looks. Also if the moon passes by try a shot with that in the frame as well. Might be able to get some neat stuff from that sections and maybe a creepy feel to it. GL
TJ