It's not too bad, the only thing I would suggest you try is a tighter crop. The person in the background is distracting, if you crop just over top of the main subjects it should make for a stronger image.
Thanks for the comment. I have it cropped to fit an 8x10 photo. I'm unsure of how to crop out the top and still have it fit on a standard print size. Any suggestions?
just position the cropping box to crop tighter, without losing your subject. Sometimes you may have to change the orientation from portrait to landscape.