One of my favorite passages

[Yahoozy]

Psalm 23 =P
do you guys think this is a bit too processed looking? i didnt do a lot to it but i'm just kind of getting that vibe...

outside of that, general C&C is welcome as always =P


thanks

 

[LaFoto]

We sang that Psalm in Finnish in mid-June. During our concert in the cathedral in Bremen (St Petri Dom).

The part in focus was partly for the sopranos (solo) with the other three voices singing only a few words of this underneath, the second for the bass as solo part.

"Ja vaikka vaeltaisin kuoleman varjon maassa, en pelkää mitään pahaa, kunsinä kuljet kanssani. Sinun vitsasi ja sauvasi, ne lohduttavat minut."

Nice close-up on the writing. Not sure if not the lamp light is too yellow here.
What "bugs" me a little is the fact that the pages are so thin, the writing from the next page is shining through...

 

[Yahoozy]

actually it was a candle =P
and i tried a lot of stuff to fix that, i find that if u drastically reduce the contrast it diminishes a bit but its still there
but, its a bible, what can you do? they need some way to cram 788,258 words (its true, look it up) in there =P
i suppose if they wanted they could just make the pages really big...