Osh Kosh B'gosh

[pab]

My wife and I were visiting our friends from our college days who had a baby only a few weeks after us. Pulled the camera out and snapped a few photos..


Here are a couple of my favs'
Give me some insight on how they look please...


My son is very photogenic..



Her daughter was also very cute and smiled a lot for me..

 

[cbarnard7]

They look great! The colors pop on your son's outfit and the little girl has very pretty eyes, which were captured well. Nice one!

 

[frommrstomommy]

The first is adorable. The second is cute as well but I don't think the dead space on the right adds anything to the photo. I think it would be stronger in portrait orientation maybe. I also see quite a green cast on her face in that one. Cutekids!!

 

[pab]

Thanks for the comments folks! Used my d600 and nikon 24-70. I plan to sell or trade my nikon 14-24 so I can get the 70-200 so I dont always have be up in peoples faces lol..

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[sashbar]

The boy looks great. You have captured a very good moment. The things that distract me are too much white space on the background and the tilted horizon. No 2 is fine as well but I would like to see the mother in focus as well.

 

[Derrel]

The second photo is just begging to be cropped into a square-format image! As to how these look, I think the greens in both are overly-saturated, and in the second shot of mother and daughter, the skin tones have a bit too much green and yellow in them. Not by a lot, but it's there. Adding a tiny bit of magenta would make the skin tones look prettier in the second shot. In the mom/daughter shot, the child's bottom eye is in shadow, and the more you look at that, the more apparent that becomes; I would suggest "dodging" that eye and socket area little bit, to lighten that up a bit.

 

[pab]

Sashbar thanks for the critique. The awkward thing was the stump was cut in a downward slant that sort of went back up on the other side. And then he was leaning foward and I just couldnt (in level of experience) find a happy medium. The other side of the tree stump had cars and people so I stayed this way.

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[pab]

Derrel, I will deff re edit the second one and removed the few dashes of saturation I put into it as well as cropping it. Thsnk you for the advice ! I appreciate the time you memebers take critiquing my photos

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