Outdoors with flash

[Samerr9]

Hi all

I hope you will like this set of the same model in the same hotel but outdoors more than the one indoors.

Any C&C is much appriciated.

Thanks


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[JAC526]

I really like the first shot but her skin looks really smooth and kind of fake to me. Maybe she just has awesome skin.

If that's the case my bad. Also the random dot bottom left is distracting. I would think about removing it.

 

[spacefuzz]

overall very nice.

1. perhaps too much green in the skin?
2. light between her legs looks funny, or perhaps the glow has other meanings?

 

[Samerr9]

I really like the first shot but her skin looks really smooth and kind of fake to me. Maybe she just has awesome skin.

If that's the case my bad. Also the random dot bottom left is distracting. I would think about removing it.

Actaully her skin is good and I softened it but maybe it is softer when resized down and I didn't sharpen the small image. Will remove that bokeh randon dot Thank you for commenting

overall very nice.

1. perhaps too much green in the skin?
2. light between her legs looks funny, or perhaps the glow has other meanings?

Thank you for your time time commenting.
1. Honestly I don't see green on my screen, I am using spyder3 for calibration but I don't really trust it. So one of us needs screen cailbration
2. Yeah there are some details in the glow.. but maybe it makes you look longer at the image, which is good!