peeper's paper project....

[peeper]

i'm working on building a set of images for an upcoming art walk this spring and i'd really like your feedback that would increase the sale-ability of my work....


_MG_3319 by peeperita, on Flickr


_MG_3336 by peeperita, on Flickr


_MG_3367 by peeperita, on Flickr


_MG_3345 by peeperita, on Flickr

the more colorful ones are pretty much sooc.......and the exposure in all of them is not an accident but is really what i was going for...

if you have the time, please hit me with a bit of constructive criticism and whatever favorites you might have....

thanks

peeper

 

[peeper]

*shameless bump*

 

[AverageJoe]

Interesting concept for it's simplicity. They all have the same tone which really binds them together. If you are looking for a way to improve them I'd suggest shooting them in the lowest ISO you have and use a tripod with a self timer. You could also convert them to B&W and see how you feel about them.

 

[peeper]

Interesting concept for it's simplicity. They all have the same tone which really binds them together. If you are looking for a way to improve them I'd suggest shooting them in the lowest ISO you have and use a tripod with a self timer. You could also convert them to B&W and see how you feel about them.

i really should start posting my exif with stuff.....


Exposure0.125 sec (1/8)Aperturef/11.0Focal Length47 mm
iso 200

i did look at them with a black and white conversion, but i was torn between those and the warm tones of the originals....i wasn't sure which version folks would be more drawn to.....my favorite images and what might sell could be two different things....

maybe i can dig up a few in black and white and see what happens here....

thank you for taking the time to comment

 

[AverageJoe]

There really isn't much noise, but in some of the gradient areas I kinda see it, it's probably more due to the JPG compression than what the actual prints will look like. Speaking of the actual prints, since you plan on displaying them you will really want to be carful about reflections either on the print themselves or the glass frame they are in.