I think they came out pretty good.
So how did you light the shot? Looks like a catch light in L side of her eyes giving them life and fairly soft shadow edge transitions. Light coming from camera L. Nice shadow pattern on the face/nose. Nice ratio. Good job.
Follow the settings below for your camera on a gray cloudy day:
- Lens: 24-105
- Aperture: 4.0
- ISO:200
- SS: 1000
I thought it was under a cover of some sort to cut the overhead light. The catch light must be from the light coming in from the open area giving direction to the light. Finding good light makes your job so much easier. I think you had her at the right distance from the edge of the cover to get a great ratio. Have you tried this in black and white?
Do you have the Nik plug ins? The price is right... free. In the early 2000's many of us paid about $500 for them. Silver efex is their b&w conversion plug in and is considered one of the best if not the best b&w plug in. The sharpening plug in is fantastic for print sharpening. Color efex has some great features as well. Viviza, does selections by color so click on a face for example and size the circle effected to the face and a drop down with brightness, contrast, structure, saturation allows you to work only on the instantly selected area.