Phobia Series, need a little help though....

[MyaLover]

Just started this series, But im calling in a little help, how can I improve these?? Pose? Make up? I dont know, let me know what you think.

1. Laliophobia: Fear of speaking.

2. Ligyrophobia: Fear of loud noises.

3. Pharmacophobia: Fear of taking medicine.

 

[DRoberts]

Really like the first one...#2 and #3 just doesn't convey what you were going for to me. But cool effects.

 

[Palyriot]

Her facial expressions seem a little overdone to me. I think it'd look better if her expressions were more subtle. After looking back, I like the first the most because of what I mentioned before. Just because these are my views, it doesn't mean you should change them. I'm sure I just view them different than other people.

 

[MyaLover]

Any suggestions?

 

[Vaporous]

Just a bit of a tweek in photoshop. I can see where your going with these, hope you don't mind