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kel_aa

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I'd like come feedback on composition and possible cropping suggestions please. Does it bother you that the eyes are hidden? Could the shadow on the rock be more interesting at a slightly different angle?

-Kelvin

Southern Georgian Bay, Ontario.
50mm lens with polarizer on 400 Black's (Fuji?)
 
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I think you should have crouched down and shot her from her own level instead of looking down on her. The glasses don't bother me, but the shadows do; if she turned a little towards the sun the shadow might not have been so pronounced. Or, you could have moved over to your left a bit to also reduce the shadow, which is sort of distracting.

This is a nice picture in of itself. Hopefully, I have been somewhat helpful... :)
 

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