Photo shoot C&c

[photofreak87]

 

[pdq5oh]

You should have put the background out of focus. Too busy and distracting. The tree branches growing out of her are not good either. I'd also remove the bright spots on the model's forehead and nose. Just my opinion though.

 

[DiskoJoe]

I agree with pdq. some nice bokeh action would have been nice. Also her face is lit well but the rest of her is not. So you large patches of negative black space.