Photo shoot C&C

HL45 · Apr 10, 2013

Tiffany ask me to do some shots for her graduation. Over cast skies with some sun. I did use some fill light on some of the shots.
Shot f/3.2 with the 70-200mm. Set Tiffany - a set on Flickr

1.

untitled shoot-026 by mtw2118, on Flickr

2.

untitled shoot-087 by mtw2118, on Flickr

3.

untitled shoot-141-2 by mtw2118, on Flickr

Designer · Apr 10, 2013

#1 is very nice, but I think you could crop the top some to cut off most of the bright corner.

Did you get any of #3 in vertical format? I think I would like it better in vertical.

HL45 · Apr 10, 2013

Designer said:
#1 is very nice, but I think you could crop the top some to cut off most of the bright corner.

Did you get any of #3 in vertical format? I think I would like it better in vertical.

untitled shoot-141 by mtw2118, on Flickr

untitled shoot-140 by mtw2118, on Flickr

How's that?

The_Traveler · Apr 11, 2013

Pretty nice material to start with.
I think #2 is totally right on the button
With the vertical shots, I suggest tighter cropping and more attention to the light on her face. She is fairly dark-skinned and the lower half of her face needs a bit more.
Notice that her arm looks heavier than in shot #2 because it is pressed against her side, ask her to move it away slightly and perhaps that bulkiness will disappear.
Terrific natural smile, good relation to the camera.

Designer · Apr 11, 2013

HL45 said:
How's that?

Oh, much better!

HL45 · Apr 11, 2013

Thanks for the comments and critique!! For the first time I'm actually happy with the results

AnnieHuley · Apr 11, 2013

Stunning portraits!!

HL45 · Apr 11, 2013

AnnieHuley said:
Stunning portraits!!

Thanks!

DiskoJoe · Apr 11, 2013

I like #1 the best. The background complimented her outfit. But you should crop it tighter. The others I dont care for bc I think the leopard print just ruined it. Tell her I said she is too hot for that cheesy faux print kind of stuff.

Rick50 · Apr 11, 2013

#2 is about perfect for me. I agree with the crop suggestions made.

HL45 · Apr 12, 2013

DiskoJoe, I will tell her lol

Notes taken on the cropping, Thanks again!

ronlane · Apr 12, 2013

I agree that #2 is really well done. The others are good as well.

CorrieMichael · Apr 16, 2013

I really super like them! Especially number 1! #2 her body looks very stiff and a bit mechanical....maybe a little more relaxed and I would love that one as well. I like the horizontal version of number 3!