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[Eva D]

I want to improve my photography and my aunt agreed to model for me... If anyone can look at them and tell me what I can do to improve and better my photography.. thanks

 

[Edsport]

The first one has her shirt overexposed and the second one has her face underexposed. Some fill light like a reflector or flash would have improved the shot...

 

[Eva D]

Here is a couple that I think is better, however, I am just a beginer and that is why I need and appreciate feedback. Thank you for your comment!

 

[NayLoMo6C]

Edsport's suggestions also apply to the second set

 

[Edsport]

Need to see those eyes...

 

[Eva D]

Are any of these better?

 

[vtf]

All the sets I believe are somewhat underexposed. Using a reflector would've filled in the strong shadows on the face and smoothed it out better. In 2 and 4 maybe off camera flash. All seems a bit soft to me.
The last 2 were shot at an extremely wide angle and close, 12 and 17mm.
#5 to me seems the best as far as exposure and focus but she has background growing out of her head, distracting. Watch for these items when shooting and keep with it. When in heavy shade or cloud cover an off camera flash is a handy tool to have.
Keep at it. :thumbup:

 

[Eva D]

OK thank you for your input, i will be sure to use a reflector next time...

 

[kundalini]

OK thank you for your input, i will be sure to use a reflector next time...

How do you plan to use it? This is a good video on using reflectors/difussers.
Using TriGrip Reflectors & Diffusers « Lastolite School of Photography