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Photos of the week - Review, please?

athiemi

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Hey guys!
I just took some photos for my Photography assignment and I would like you guys to take a look and give me some tips. I'm completely new at this, so...
Feel free to give your honest opinions, I'm here to learn :)

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I really like the first one, the symmetry is cool and I have a thing for colored doors.

The second doesn't have a real focal point, am I looking at the bridge or the boat? I also don't like the placement of the bridge in the frame. The sky is boring and non-dramatic.

The third, I think, could give people nightmares. In that sense it's good because it evokes an emotion.

In the fourth, are you exploring how lines disappear on the horizon? Converging lines?

The last isn't overly exciting.

But, I think that all of them are exposed properly and nice and sharp, other than the bridge shot I suppose.
 
I like #4 just don't like the motorcycle in the pic. the car is good and the pic overall is good. Just wish the motorcycle wasn't there
 
Wow... Thank you so much for the replies...it helped a lot!

Bo4key I appreciate the time you took to review them...really...thank you :)

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florotory
yeah, the motorcycle bothers me a little :/
 
I like very much the shot with birds, the most lively and really about something. For Bo4key there is no focal point, for me there is a couple hundreds of them. :D
 
I like very much the shot with birds, the most lively and really about something. For Bo4key there is no focal point, for me there is a couple hundreds of them. :D

My focal point comment was directed at the bridge shot.
 
I like 2 or 3. 2 because the line in the clouds parallels the bridge. I don't really see a whole going on in 4,5,. And 1 is just a door.
 
It would help the quality of review greatly if we had some idea as to the nature of the assignment.
 
The assignment is just to take a picture per week. There's no theme or anything. It's just for training, getting some experience and improve our ''look''.
 
I like very much the shot with birds, the most lively and really about something. For Bo4key there is no focal point, for me there is a couple hundreds of them. :D

My focal point comment was directed at the bridge shot.
Sorry, you are right, I apologize. I guess I was reading too fast. Looks like you find #3 also emotionally loaded. :D Sorry again.
 

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