Photoshoot down by the Philadelphia Art Museum, c&c welcome

[sean7488]

The other day I did a photoshoot with a model that wanted to do it down by the museum, so I gave it a shot. The lighting I used for the first 2 was a lumedyne external light shot into a white umbrella. The 3rd one was shot with a nikon sb-600. And 4th was just natural light. Would really like some critique on these. Thanks.

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amanda-1 by sean7488, on Flickr

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amanda-2 by sean7488, on Flickr


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amanda-20 by sean7488, on Flickr

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amanda-29 by sean7488, on Flickr

 

[mjbine]

The first two the sky is blown out and the #3 look underexposed. I do like the composition in #4 to me it is the best of the set.