Pic from a shoot yesterday!

Kofman13 · Nov 10, 2012

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MLeeK · Nov 10, 2012

Whatever that is on the wall is a REAL draw. The image without it is a really great shot. The line leading through from the railing is a great dynamic for the composition.
I think you color is supposed to be the yellowy vintage look? If it isn't-then that's what you are getting. Otherwise it is very nicely done. Exposure is good. Focus looks a little short-maybe the strap. Chances are it could be how it was resized too.
The texture is nice, subtle and I really like it!

sactown024 · Nov 10, 2012

I like the texture you did on the photo (unless I am seeing things) but I think it would look better if it was only one the wall and not the railing.

photo looks great!

Designer · Nov 10, 2012

Hauntingly beautiful! Both the model and the pose. I can't say much for your choice of background though.

Tee · Nov 10, 2012

Interesting capture. I feel that it would be stronger if her right shoulder was back and a little more of her face turned to see the white of her left eye. This would draw the viewer away from the background a little more.

Kofman13 · Nov 12, 2012

MLeeK said:
Whatever that is on the wall is a REAL draw. The image without it is a really great shot. The line leading through from the railing is a great dynamic for the composition.
I think you color is supposed to be the yellowy vintage look? If it isn't-then that's what you are getting. Otherwise it is very nicely done. Exposure is good. Focus looks a little short-maybe the strap. Chances are it could be how it was resized too.
The texture is nice, subtle and I really like it!

yeah was going for vintage. THANKS! yeah i can photoshop that light fixture out..