Picture of my sister c&c please :)

[kayliana]

 

[cauzimme]

It's seem that the focus was not made on the eyes.
And try to crop, I think theres a too big space between the head and the end of the picture. Keep working!

 

[iolair]

You found a corner with nice, even lighting and the pose is good.

I don't know to what stage you planned this shot, but if you want viewers to concentrate on her face, put her in a less busy shirt - and perhaps long sleeves.

 

[kayliana]

Aw dang, I actually had this picture cropped, I posted the wrong one. Thank you. I never thought about long sleeves, I'm new to this, but I have been reading a lot. Thank you guys!

 

[Anelle]

Kayliana, I think this would look nice in black and white and I think it is a bit underexposed BUT I like bright photos....

I think you did miss the focus on her face but at this size it is hard to say where it fell. I really like the eye contact you got and her expression.

I would love to try a black and white action I have on this one, but I see your photos are not okay to edit.