Pictures From Today, i need some critics.

[PMphotography]

the model in all of these pictures was my girlfriend Lizbeth.

Sand Scribbles

the tough picture

Lizzy in wonderland

 

[Sodak]

1. Love it. Wouldn't change anything.

2. I like the composition, but there seems to be a few hot spots.

3. The big empty sky, for my taste, takes up way too much of the picture. I'd crop and make the pretty girl more prominent.

 

[jbeanv]

Number one is my fav. The third one has a weird green spot in the bottom left. Nice job!

 

[bdavis]

I dont care for #1...the composition isnt that interesting, I dont like the sepia, and its underexposed. If you were trying to make her a silhouette, you need to make your shutter speed a bit faster to make her black. It's too strange just seeing part of her like that.

2. This one is nice, but I would get rid of the vignette, it doesnt add anything to the picture.

3. This one looks like an HDR gone bad. The oversharpening/saturation look terrible. Also the green lens flare is distracting, I would clone that out.

All these photos need work on composition, with the exception of #2. This is my favorite, the subject is placed a little off center and the wood railings lead your eye right to her.

 

[Roey]

Interesting. I would actually prefer a little more sky to #3 because it would enhance the squatting position of the sugject. Nice job.