Playing with a dud

[wyogirl]

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Before



Thoughts?

 

[tirediron]

I love the colours you've produced in #1, but I think it's a LOT stronger with as much of the foreground as possible cropped away.

 

[wyogirl]

I thought about cropping more foreground, but decided to keep the boars tusk at the bottom third line.... I'll play with it some more. Thanks for the feedback.

 

[LarryLomona]

Very nice. I like it.

 

[wyogirl]

Slightly more cropped off the bottom... How's that Tirediron?

 

[sleist]

Night job!
I actually like the foreground - I would just make it brighter by dodging it some.