playing with light

[photocist]

and skateboarding.


brandon jasper me by photocist, on Flickr


me light squares by photocist, on Flickr


brandon ollie2 by photocist, on Flickr


brandon flip by photocist, on Flickr

A few shots. I am working on making my shots have more "energy" in them; almost like a positive "tension" in the shot. Any other critique is welcome!

 

[Boutte]

Number three is a great shot.

 

[Yellow Wagon]

#3 is great...the rest seem snapshot-ish to me

 

[sean7488]

I agree with the others, number 3 is fantastic. The light painting ones are pretty cool too.

 

[Studio7Four]

Of the skating shots I actually prefer the second. I like the composition of the first, but there's just not enough contrast between the skater and the relatively busy background to make him really stand out.

I like the feel of the second. The amount of lighting captured, combined with the reflections of the sunset, tell the viewer when this shot was taken. I really like the way in which he is cut off by the top of the frame, it conveys the feeling that he is busting out of the confines of the shot.