Playing with my new 50mm. C&C, please?

[moze229]

Yeah, the first one you might have missed the focus on, but the lighting is better. The second one looks pretty good, just a little dark and perhaps could be a little more interesting with a different composition. While they aren't perfect, they are a lot better than the first one don't you think? I think it's also better in this one that you didn't show the surface that they were sitting on.