please c+c no edit

[im chumming]

 

[tirediron]

Not bad, although it has more of a snapshot appearance than a posed/planned image. The main concern I see is that it appears you've missed focus as her face seems soft. I would also consider cropping it a little more tightly as there's a bit of empty space image right and top.

 

[im chumming]

agreed.

 

[Robin Usagani]

you used super wide angle on this?

 

[im chumming]

no 18-55mm

 

[Robin Usagani]

Ok.. so yo used probably close 18mm? She looks very distorted. Very long legs etc.

 

[im chumming]

distorted? really? her legs are actually long..

 

[im chumming]

so you recommend not shooting close to the 18mm mark

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Yeah, you get more distortion the shorter your focal length. You'd have done better to go closer to the 50mm and back up some.

She doesn't look disfigured or anything. Her legs just look uber long.

 

[im chumming]

got it thanks

 

[Derrel]

Her direction of gaze avoids the viewer of the photo, and her feet are cropped off. The photo is about 90 percent open, uninteresting space on the right hand side of the frame. Overall, this is a weak photo.

 

[Davor]

i feel like there should be more light below her upper body. the lighting is fine around her face but then you seem to have got too much of the darker part.

 

[JeffieLove]

Maybe I'm just weird, but this looks like a composite to me. THe girl and pole don't look like they belong on that background...