Please comment.

[JeanFrancoisPaquet]

This is my first post and first editing (be gentle
).
Missed my train in Baden (Switzerland) by one minute that morning, so I plulled out my camera and had a little fun.
Enjoy.

Baden, Switzerland. - The Photo Forum Photo Gallery

JF

 

[DiskoJoe]

http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/...forum-functions-pictoral-guide-using-tpf.html

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Comment on what? I see no pics...

 

[JeanFrancoisPaquet]

Sorry, here you go.
Baden, Switzerland | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

 

[Overread23 1]

Read the thread that DiskoJoe posted - if you're unsure of any parts just ask. I've put the medium image tag link from the upload you've put onto the site into your first post for you

 

[BlackSheep]

Overread, that was nice of you to do.

Jean Francois, your image is nice, the colours are lovely. I have trouble trying to see what the focal point/subject of it is, though - my eye goes from the sun on the far right, then moves to the fan/light just to the left of it, and then to the tower further on to the left. I think that picking one of the three would have made for a stronger image.

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Can I ask what your intended subject was? Its not clear to me...

The foreground appears under-exposed to me... The train is not in clear focus (to my eyes anyway)...

 

[JeanFrancoisPaquet]

Subject was the train, I guess it went out of focus in lightroom.
Keep the advices and comments coming, Thats how I'll get better.

Thank you guys