please help me with this banner for bands promo pics

[DeepSpring]

I made it as something to post around on bands myspace's. Any ideas on how I should change it or what to add?

 

[craig]

Personally I would take out "Amazingly low price". The shoot can get expensive. Disappointing clients is a no no.

 

[DeepSpring]

the thing is everyone i would do wont be older then around 18 and dont have very much money. I was thinking of charging around $50 and then maybe $20 or so more depending on if they want photoshop done and to what extent. But i'll think about it thanks