I agree, crop out the purple and the shoulder, and it'd be an improvement. I smiled when i saw it though... my dog gets that same look so I can relate.
'For more!' said Mr. Limbkins. 'Compose yourself, Bumble, and answer me distinctly. Do I understand that the dog asked for more, after he had eaten the supper allotted by the dietary?'
'That dog will be hung,' said the gentleman in the white waistcoat. 'I know that dog will be hung.'