plz c&c

[lipun4u]

Vidyavihar Skywalker by Asit Kumar Dhal, on Flickr

Please suggest on the above photo.

 

[LizardKing]

Composition is great, but the exposure has a lot of room for improvement... Use a tripod and lower the ISO for a start.
Most of the times for night photos like this, it's better to use Manual mode and take your time to find the best exposure.