Pond and Barn

[Patrickktown]

• Canon EOS REBEL T3i
• 1/320 f/5.6 ISO 100 25.0 mm
• EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II

 

[timor]

Nice composition.

 

[Patrickktown]

Thank you!

 

[Braineack]

the branch cutting into the frame on the top right needs to disappear

 

[longbaugh]

Good job with the contrast. I'm not sure I agree about the branch.

 

[Trblmkr]

I do agree with the branch on the right, it does noting for this comp.

However, to me it's not a B/W, you have shades of grey here. So kicking up the contrast would help the image IMO.

 

[timor]

That are the problems with our vision and camera action. We tend to see like in tunnel, camera misses nothing. There is not only the question about the branch, but also the wire right in the front. Well, it is there. As I oppose cloning, maybe wider shot including more of that tree will be in order. This tree may actually give a nice vertical closure of the frame for otherwise quite horizontal landscape.

 

[Patrickktown]

I appreciate all the comments and suggestions. I think sometimes we feel the emotional attachment to our own photos that we miss the obvious. Like I did here.

 

[timor]

I appreciate all the comments and suggestions. I think sometimes we feel the emotional attachment to our own photos that we miss the obvious. Like I did here.

It is still nice shot. I like it the way it is.