Portrait of a Flower

[Tiller]

An ongoing project of mine. C&C welcome.


IMG_4433.jpg by tsmcdona, on Flickr

 

[Tiller]

Waiting for class to start bump...

 

[annamaria]

Beautiful

 

[limr33 3]

Love the tones and the shallow dof. I wonder if a tiny bit could be taken off the left, just to keep the space on either side of the flower even. Or a square crop?

 

[Tiller]

I tried a tighter crop but I didn't like it as much.


IMG_4433-2.jpg by tsmcdona, on Flickr

 

[limr33 3]

Yeah, you're right, it needs more space. So then just a sliver off the left? It's oddly distracting that there's more space on one side than on the other. But that's probably more about my flashes of OCD

 

[Tiller]

I'll try it when I get home

 

[timor]

I am on this with Leonore, somewhere in the middle the crop will be right. In the original image there is too much space especially on the sides.

 

[Tiller]

Sorry it took so long for the re-edit. Enough off the left?


IMG_4433.jpg by tsmcdona, on Flickr

 

[limr33 3]

Just right!