Portrait of Kara (C&C please)

[lmchelaru]

First time in a studio. What do you think?

 

[transformed]

Hi there-

Pretty model. The wrinkled fabric is a bit distracting to me and overall I don't think it does much for the photo. Maybe crop in- fill the frame more with her face for more impact?

 

[BKMOOD]

Maybe I'm just old and can't seee that well anymore but she just looks out of focus -- and that's distracting. And the highlights on her forehead looks clipped and overblown.