Portrait Portfilo

[Jonathan Schertzer]

1.
Kira by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr

2.
Environmental Portrait by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr

3.
Kira by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr

4.
Kira by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr

5.
Kira by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr

6.
Self-portrait by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr


7.
Kira by jonathanschertzer, on Flickr
I would really appreciate some critique on these.

 

[Samerr9]

Very nice set.. I really like 7 and 5

 

[DSLR noob]

I don't really feel like my critique would be very useful as you portraiture is FAR superior to mine. I will say however that the amount of emotion you have captured in these pictures is stunning and moving. VERY powerful images. If I was the type of person to have money to throw around on buying and framing pictures to display in my home I would use most of the images from the "Kira" shoot simply to make a room feel friendlier and warm. Very beautiful shots and extremely flattering to both the model and photographer. Keep up the good work.

 

[cuezombies]

Love 2 and 7!

 

[Aye-non Oh-non Imus]

You should do a series with the gentleman in #2. Quite the character.

#6 is a good idea, but I think the execution is lacking somewhat. The shadow from his chin is breaking up the lines you have created.

#7 is just a fun image. Love the playfulness.

 

[Trever1t]

I find #5 and #7 interesting.

#5 you capture momentum nicely.
#7 , a nice silhouette implying motion with a warm gradient.