Portraits - C&C (feedback) please

AllHailZ

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Long time no see.

I finally enrolled in Photography 2, and I'd like feedback from you guys on the pics I've taken for the class so far. I developed these 35mm film pictures myself in the darkroom. The university just got new Nikon Coolscan 9000 ED, and I scanned the negatives directly. Quality came out pretty good, I think.

1.
GabiCameraWindow.jpg


2.
GabiDarkSteps.jpg


3.
GabiFarmyGrass.jpg


4.
GabiHairCam.jpg


5.
GabiBuggyOff.jpg


6.
GabiHorsey.jpg


7.
GabiJump.jpg


8.
GabiKneelLight2.jpg


9.
GabiKneelLight3.jpg


10.
GabiLieGrass.jpg


11.
GabiLieWood2.jpg


12.
GabiOpenWin.jpg


13.
GabiSteps.jpg


14.
GabiSteps2.jpg


15.
GabiWin.jpg


16.
GabiWindowLoUp.jpg


Let me know if it's too many... I don't know if the rules have changed about the number or not since Spring 2007 when I last posted here.

Thanks!
 
I really like the first shot! Definitely my favorite of the group!
 
Thanks, lifeafter2am!

I forgot, if anybody could work on this one, I'd appreciate it a lot. I don't like the sunspot...

GabiRail.jpg
 
15 and 16 do it best for me. Nice series there, Hailz.
 
Thanks, nealj.

Nobody else has any critique/comments/feedback?
 
It's hard for me to comment individually when I see so many.. it's probably a personal issue.. heh.. but as a set, I really like the mood you have going here. As a set, I don't think the horse image fits, but on its own, it's a nice photo. I really like #13.. it's creepy..

A little off topic I you don't mind me asking, what part of NC are you in? I was born and raised in Burlington myself.. heh..
 
i like 10 and 14...too bad she didn't smile more
 
I see your point, bhop. I'll keep that in mind from now on and post less.

I'm from Durham, but right now I'm at college in Greensboro.

And Mesoam, she did -

GabiLieGrassLaugh.jpg
 
lol, that's not me, that was my photography partner from class.

I'm a guy. ;)

Sun Devil, I was thinking that the brightness of the window was already dramatic enough, that's why I wanted to get rid of the sunspot.
 

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